WHAT IS HAIKU? - Week 13
Claire Gardien (France)
Haiku, poem of a brief instant of nature life and the emotion
felt at the precise moment it happened. A three lines'prose of
5/7/5 syllables. The third line is either opposed to the text or
re-inforces it.
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David Terelinck (Guildford, NSW)
Haiku is a journey along a road lined with small windows. Each
time we pause to peer into one of these, we are astounded by the
beauty and depth of the vista behind them.
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Julie Simpson (Millford, NSW)
Sometimes a simple, stunning mental snapshot, sometimes as
boring as a slideshow at the neighbours.
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Luong Son Truong (Khanh Hoa, Vietnam)
When sounds are used to echo immortal silence a haiku is
tuned.
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Matt Hetherington (Melbourne, Vic)
a poem of a poetic moment
written as briefly as possible
in the present tense
if regarding nature, itÂ’s haiku
if human nature, it's senryu
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The response to this exercise has been wonderful but it is time
to wind it up no more submissions, please. I will later attempt a
collage to summarise what we have shared.
John Bird, for the AHS Definitions Project.